2:I am a man with a hat,I make friends and and I am one of the kindest.
3:My singing inspector is a man called Mr Raymond he where's knickerbockers thick socks like a
hunting man
4:Then the world war Irish and British!
5:I felt bad for the people in the war.
6:After that we went to class.
7:Our singing instructor was yelling at us because we haven't sang one song.
8:We where very scared .
9:We sang a song but it didn't work out.
10:He shouted and shouted then we went home.
Njongo it sounds very cool and interesting Mr.Raymond sounds like a very angry man
ReplyDeleteI like the emotion you used and I think it was funny.
ReplyDeleteI'd like to hear more about how the singing inspector made you feel, Njongo.
ReplyDeleteA fair description of the events, Njongo, but you need to also add your feelings and opinions.
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